Thursday, 20 August 2020

Writing Prompt 1

 



2 comments:

  1. Ka pai Khaalid. I love the way you described the cold sweeping in. It makes the cold sound like a thinking person. Do you know what it is called when you described something like it is human?

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  2. Kia ora Khaalid. What a great start to your story. As Phil said the way you described the cold sweeping in was really great. I could really imagine it. I wonder what difficulties he would face on his journey up the mountain?

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