Awesome, Khaalid, your writing is getting better every time. I really like your description of what the man was felling as he climbed. I wonder where this mountain actually is...?
Kia ora Khaalid. Thanks again for sharing your writing. You are getting very good at adding detail and description in to help the reader build a mental picture of the story and imagine it happening. In class we have been working on using verbs, adverbs and adjective words to start our sentences - you should give it a go!
Awesome, Khaalid, your writing is getting better every time. I really like your description of what the man was felling as he climbed. I wonder where this mountain actually is...?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Khaalid. Thanks again for sharing your writing. You are getting very good at adding detail and description in to help the reader build a mental picture of the story and imagine it happening. In class we have been working on using verbs, adverbs and adjective words to start our sentences - you should give it a go!
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