I was a students at Owairaka District School.
Kia Ora KhaalidYou are trying really hard to use descriptive words like 'bravely' and 'tragic'. Is this a Star Wars inspired story?
Kia ora Khaalid. Great work with your story! You have started to build up a good sense of tension with your detail and description. I wonder what will happen next...?
Genki,Very good use of English Khaalid.This does sound like what a script in the next star wars movie might be.Caleb @ Owairaka District School
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Kia ora Khaalid. Great work with your story! You have started to build up a good sense of tension with your detail and description. I wonder what will happen next...?
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ReplyDeleteVery good use of English Khaalid.
This does sound like what a script in the next star wars movie might be.
Caleb @ Owairaka District School