Thanks for sharing your writing Khaalid. Excellent job. You did a great job at building up the personality and life of the giant so the reader could connect with him. I feel sorry for him! I wonder what could happen next in your story? Maybe he could make a friend?
Thanks for sharing your writing Khaalid. Excellent job. You did a great job at building up the personality and life of the giant so the reader could connect with him. I feel sorry for him! I wonder what could happen next in your story? Maybe he could make a friend?
ReplyDeleteHi Rachael thank you for commenting on my story the story its about this big giant
ReplyDeletethat lives in a park.
Blog ya later Khaalid.