I was a students at Owairaka District School.
Thanks for sharing your story Khaalid. You have really set the mood well with some great vocabulary choices. Try reading your story out loud to yourself or to someone in your househole to make sure it flows correctly. Keep up the great work.
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Thanks for sharing your story Khaalid. You have really set the mood well with some great vocabulary choices. Try reading your story out loud to yourself or to someone in your househole to make sure it flows correctly. Keep up the great work.
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