Thank you for doing week one, day one, activity three and for sharing the story about the spider. It sounds like you were super brave in that moment and I'm glad the spider didn’t hurt you! I don’t really find spiders or insects scary but I hate mice and rats!
You have done the activity correctly Khaalid, however I have had a look at some of your other posts and I can see how smart and creative you are. I think you have the potential to put more detail and thought into your posts, what do you think?
In order to get the full points for your future posts, it would be great to see some more information and detail, and even some images if you wanted to - for example in this post you could’ve added an image of a spider, or written about where you saw the spider, how it make you feel seeing the spider, or what you would’ve done differently.
Have another look at the activity instructions and add some more writing and detail, or images to the rest of your posts.
Well done for posting and I look forward to seeing more detail, information and images in your future posts. Have a fantastic afternoon!
Ola Khaalid,
ReplyDeleteThank you for doing week one, day one, activity three and for sharing the story about the spider. It sounds like you were super brave in that moment and I'm glad the spider didn’t hurt you! I don’t really find spiders or insects scary but I hate mice and rats!
You have done the activity correctly Khaalid, however I have had a look at some of your other posts and I can see how smart and creative you are. I think you have the potential to put more detail and thought into your posts, what do you think?
In order to get the full points for your future posts, it would be great to see some more information and detail, and even some images if you wanted to - for example in this post you could’ve added an image of a spider, or written about where you saw the spider, how it make you feel seeing the spider, or what you would’ve done differently.
Have another look at the activity instructions and add some more writing and detail, or images to the rest of your posts.
Well done for posting and I look forward to seeing more detail, information and images in your future posts. Have a fantastic afternoon!
Eliza :)